八、主题升华句积累

4种升华主题的句型

好的主题升华句能给文章起到“画龙点睛”的作用,下面是4种简单易学又能有效点题的结尾方式。.

1.用only引起的倒装句

(1)When meeting people in need on the road, I would try my best to help them like the family. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.(2021八省市联考)当我在路上遇到需要帮助的人时,我会尽力像家人一样帮助他们。只有这样,将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。

(2)Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.

直到那时,我才意识到,正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。

(3)Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love.只有当我们打开心门,我们才能沐浴在灿烂的阳光下享受爱的温暖。

2.用强调句型

(1)It was on that day that I realized what Dad had accomplished at my age was much greater than I did.

(2021浙江6月卷)就在那天,我意识到爸爸在我这个年纪所取得的成就比我所做的要大得多。

(2)It was Tom's selflessness that taught me the value of kindness.正是汤姆的无私使我明白了善良的宝贵。

(3)It was a simple knot and an understanding heart that saved me from the awkward situation.

正是这一个简单的绳结和一颗善解人意的心将我从尴尬中拯救出来。

3.用名言名句

在写作中若能根据文章主题,恰当运用名言名句,有效点题,定能吸引评卷者的眼球。在使用名言名句时,我们可以套用一个通用的固定句式:

I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as the saying goes:“ Roses given, fragrance in hand." Now I couldn't agree more with those words.(2021八省市联考) 我决定把“爱”传给别人。正如一句谚语所说，“赠人玫瑰，手有余香。"现在,我非常同意这些话。

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(1)Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者,事竟成。

(2)No pains, no gains./No sweet without sweat.没有付出,就没有回报。

(3)A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。

(4)Never judge from appearance.不可以貌取人。

(5)Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是成功的第一步。

(6)Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.天才出自勤奋。

(7)Honesty is the best policy.诚实为上策。

(8)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

4.用修辞手法

(1)Today's experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories.(比喻)今天的经历像是一朵永不凋谢的花朵,永远绽放在我记忆的长河里。

(2)His words floated in the wind like a bird's happy song.(比喻)他的话语回荡在风中,就像鸟儿的歌声一样欢快动听。

(3)Follow your dream and the universe will open doors where there are only walls.(拟人)追随你的梦想吧,宇宙会在原本只有墙的地方为你敞开大门。

(4)Love matters more than anything, which can conquer any difficulty.(拟人)(2022常州5月质量检测)爱胜过一切,它能打败世间的任何困难。